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Sunday, 22 November 2015

Under the sea

4 comments:

  1. (If you are go into the sea) It doesn't make sense you need to proof read your work.

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  2. nice work Istvan but next time you have to go back and read it and go over the mistakes. but over all nice work.

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  3. Maybe Work on your spelling a bit more

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