Sunday, 22 November 2015

Jack and the beanstalk remake

Mazhar and the beanstalk

Once upon a time there lived a young boy named Mazhar, who lived in a little cottage in the little village of Doonesworth. Mazhar had no brothers or sisters only his caring and loving father called Griffin. Mazhar and his father were very poor with no money nor did they have enough food to last the 2 weeks.

One day Mazhar’s father had asked him to go to the local market and see if anyone was willing to buy their cow Daisy. As Mazhar slowly made his way through the market an old looking man stopped him and said “are you selling the cow of yours” “yes I am. Are you wanting to buy it off me?” “why yes but I can only pay you in MAGIC BEANS”. Mazhar thought for a while and came to his final conclusion. “What do these magic beans do?’’ Mazhar asked curiously. “What they do young man is they lead a big beanstalk right up through the clouds to a magical place” “ok but if they don’t work I will come back for a refund”.

As Mazhar walked into the door Father had said “oi what did you get for the cow. “I got four magic beans that lead us to a magical place with riches and lots of things to make us wealthy again”. “good on you son”. So Mazhar and his father went outside and planted the beans, they then had only put one drop of water on the beans and before you knew it the beanstalk had struck out of the ground and sped up past the clouds. Mazhar and his father jumped onto a leaf and the leaf went around in a spiral right up past the clouds. As they jumped off the leaf there was a big rainbow walkway leading to a big creamy coloured castle.

Mazhar and his father looked at each other and said “let’s rob the place”. So the two of them ran in and stole three bags of pure gold without anyone noticing. After they had took the gold they ran straight to the beanstalk and made their way back down. When they got down they put all the gold inside, grabbed father’s axe and chopped down the beanstalk.

From this day forward Mazhar and his father were as rich as can be and they lived happily ever after.


  1. This is a funny piece of writing. Great work

  2. This piece of writing is just amazing and it's so funny plz keep writing more things like this :)

  3. This is so funny and I really good. Nice work Calix =)