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Sunday, 22 November 2015

garden party

3 comments:

  1. good job Brooke. Next time you should try and elaborate more.

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  2. I liked how you started of but the ending was a bit sudden 'they all got hit and died' maybe elaborate/describe the ending a bit better next time :)

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  3. nice work Brooke but next maybe describe the ending more:)

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