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Sunday, 22 November 2015

6 comments:

  1. nice pics but u could put some facts in also.

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  2. I like the pictures that you added it makes the slide look more lively but maybe a bit more editing next time :)

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  3. i liked it but more editing would make it better

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  4. i liked it but more editing would make it better

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  5. Nice writing but I think you could have added a bit more writing
    but the rest was fine
    and I liked the pictures

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  6. Nice writing but I think you could have added a bit more writing
    but the rest was fine
    and I liked the pictures

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