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Sunday, 6 September 2015

THE WATCHER

2 comments:

  1. Owen your story is good and has good ideas, but it has lots of spelling and punctuation mistakes so next time before you publish you should get someone to cheek for mistakes. but all together it is a good story.

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  2. Owen your story is good and has good ideas, but it has lots of spelling and punctuation mistakes so next time before you publish you should get someone to cheek for mistakes. but all together it is a good story.

    ReplyDelete