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Sunday, 6 September 2015

The Stalker

7 comments:

  1. like the story
    but you could write more

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  2. like the story
    but you could write more

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  3. Great story Hayley. Just use a bit more full stops.

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  4. Great story Hayley. Just use a bit more full stops.

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  5. Great story, but could you write a little bit more PLZ

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  6. Great story, but could you write a little bit more PLZ

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  7. Good story, but need to use more punctuation (especially full stops) Story could be bit longer with more details

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