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Sunday, 6 September 2015

The Southmall Murderer

4 comments:

  1. great story
    You may need to fix up yous to you's
    Other wise it was good

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  2. great story
    You may need to fix up yous to you's
    Other wise it was good

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  3. That was a killer story Calix. I enjoyed your plot and lay out. But next time...huh...wait a minute...I didn't find any mistakes and I also think it was great . ^w^

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  4. This story was really good I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice work Calix =)

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