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Thursday, 3 September 2015

Natalie's narrative writing

7 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed reading your story it was well written and was good to read

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  3. I like how there was scary music in it

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  4. Wow, this is a really well written story. I have to admit I had a bit of a chill down my spine.

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  5. Amazing Nat I really enjoyed it and I loved the music it went really well with the story.You might be the next up coming loved writer.

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  6. Natalie I thought your story was well written and it was exciting to to read and think about. I liked how you added scary music in your story. Natalie your story was good, but next time make it a bit less creepy

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  7. great story Natalie. I really liked the way that you described everything so specific.

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