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Thursday, 3 September 2015

Myths and legends

3 comments:

  1. Your story was good grace the characters were well described. I like how you set the scene at school to make it just that little bit more creepy. Although it was pretty short I think you need to elaborate more on your paragraphs.

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  2. Your story was good grace the characters were well described. I like how you set the scene at school to make it just that little bit more creepy. Although it was pretty short I think you need to elaborate more on your paragraphs.

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  3. It was pretty short I think you need to elaborate more on your paragraphs.
    Your story was good Grace the characters were described well too.

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