Nice story summer but I kinda got lost in what was going on in the story because of all the spelling errors. Also all of your ' i ' needs to be capitals when there by them self. But good job ^w^
Nice story summer but I kinda got lost in what was going on in the story because of all the spelling errors. Also all of your ' i ' needs to be capitals when there by them self. But good job ^w^
Nice story summer but I kinda got lost in what was going on in the story because of all the spelling errors. Also all of your ' i ' needs to be capitals when there by them self. But good job ^w^
ReplyDeleteNice story summer but I kinda got lost in what was going on in the story because of all the spelling errors. Also all of your ' i ' needs to be capitals when there by them self. But good job ^w^
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