Wednesday, 29 July 2015
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Monday, 27 July 2015
Importance of comma's
Without comma:Let's eat boss
With comma:Let's eat, boss
Without comma:Your donation just helped someone get a job.
With comma:Your donation just helped someone, get a job
Without comma:we are going to learn how to cut and paste kids!
With comma:We are going to learn how to cut and paste, kids!
With comma:Let's eat, boss
Without comma:Your donation just helped someone get a job.
With comma:Your donation just helped someone, get a job
Without comma:we are going to learn how to cut and paste kids!
With comma:We are going to learn how to cut and paste, kids!
Sunday, 26 July 2015
Comma used in correctly changes the sentence
The importance of commas -
I had eggs, toast, and orange juice
I had eggs, toast and orange juice
I had eggs, toast, and orange juice
I had eggs, toast and orange juice
!THE IMPORTANCE OF COMMA!=By Shriya
!THE IMPORTANCE OF COMMA!
SENTENCES WITHOUT COMMAS
1=Let’s eat grandma
2=Let’s eat kids
3=Let’s eat grandpa
4=Let’s bake mom
5=Let’s cut dad
6=Let’s eat brother
7=Go eat my child
8=It’s time to eat children
SENTENCES WITH COMMAS
1=Let’s eat,grandma
2=Let’s eat,kids
3=Let’s eat,grandpa
4=Let’s bake,mom
5=Let’s cut,dad
6=Let’s eat,brother
7=Go eat, my child
8=It’s time to eat, children
The importance of comma's
Cows please close gate.
Cows, please close gate.
Cows, please close gate.
Comma fun!
Without a comma: Chickens keep dogs on a lead
With a comma: Chickens, keep dogs on lead.
Without comma: Please no smoking food beverages in the clinic
With comma: Please no smoking, food or beverages in the clinic
Without comma: Slow children crossing
With comma: Slow, children crossing
Comma's are not to be underestimated
Comma's are important too!
Without punctuation: It’s time to eat children.
With punctuation: It’s time to eat, Children.
Without punctuation: Kill, not innocent
With punctuation: kill not, innocent

I take inspiration in cooking dogs and family - I take inspiration in, cooking dogs, and family.
Unable to eat diarrhea - Unable to eat, diarrhea.
!THE IMPORTANCE OF COMMAS!
No punctuation)Let's eat Grandpa
Punctuation)Let's eat, Grandpa
correct punctuation saves lives
No punctuation)I.Like.The.Way.The.Little.Voice.In.Your.Head.Takes.Pauses.When.
You.Read.This
Punctuation)I like the way the little voice in your head takes pauses when
you read this.
No punctuation)While Dad was eating the dog the cat and the horse tried to steal his meal.
Punctuation)While Dad was eating, the dog, the cat and the horse tried to steal his meal.
No punctuation)I saw a board on the road which read
Go slow, men at work
Punctuation)Go slow men at work
No punctuation)Let's eat, mom
Punctuation)Let's, eat mom
Biggest comma fails
Without punctuation
1. The average American consumes more than 400 Africans
With punctuation
The average American consumes more than, 400 Africans.
2.
Without punctuation
With punctuation
Violators will be towed, and fined $50
3.
Without punctuation
With punctuation
Hunters please use caution when hunting,pedestrians using walk trails.
1. The average American consumes more than 400 Africans
With punctuation
The average American consumes more than, 400 Africans.
2.
Without punctuation

Violators will be towed, and fined $50
3.
Without punctuation
With punctuation
Hunters please use caution when hunting,pedestrians using walk trails.
Comma fun
Let's eat grandpa
Let's eat grandpa
Chicken's keep dogs on lead
chicken's, keep dogs on lead
while Dad was eating the dog the cat and the horse tried to steal his meal
while Dad was eating, the dog the cat and the horse tried to steal his meal
I like cooking dog's and kids
I like cooking,dogs and kids
we're going to learn to cut and paste kids
we're going to learn to cut and paste, kids
slow children at play
slow,children at play
I just love to bake children
I just love to bake,children
Let's eat grandpa
Chicken's keep dogs on lead
chicken's, keep dogs on lead
while Dad was eating the dog the cat and the horse tried to steal his meal
while Dad was eating, the dog the cat and the horse tried to steal his meal
I like cooking dog's and kids
I like cooking,dogs and kids
we're going to learn to cut and paste kids
we're going to learn to cut and paste, kids
slow children at play
slow,children at play
I just love to bake children
I just love to bake,children
Comma fun!
Chickens keep dogs on lead
Chickens , keep dogs on lead
Were going to learn how to cut and paste kids!
were going to learn how to cut and paste , kids!
Attention toilet only for disable elderly pregnant children.
Attention toilet only for disable, elderly, pregnant, children.
Caution pedestrians slippery when wet.
Caution pedestrians, slippery when wet.
Chickens , keep dogs on lead
Were going to learn how to cut and paste kids!
were going to learn how to cut and paste , kids!
Attention toilet only for disable elderly pregnant children.
Attention toilet only for disable, elderly, pregnant, children.
Caution pedestrians slippery when wet.
Caution pedestrians, slippery when wet.
Slow children at play
slow, children at play
Lets eat grandpa
Lets eat, grandpa
The importance of commas
with punctuation
I like kicking, people, and friends
Not with punctuation
I like kicking people and friends
I like kicking, people, and friends
Not with punctuation
I like kicking people and friends
Why comma's are used
1. Chicken's Keep dogs on lead.
Chicken's, keep dogs on lead.
2. Let's eat grandpa
Lets eat, grandpa
3. Were going to learn to cut and paste kids.
Were going to learn to cut and paste,kids.
Chicken's, keep dogs on lead.
2. Let's eat grandpa
Lets eat, grandpa
3. Were going to learn to cut and paste kids.
Were going to learn to cut and paste,kids.
The importance of a comma
Commas are an important part of punctuation. If you don't think so, then read these sentences and then remove the commas and see how it sounds.
Let's eat, grandpa.
Let's eat grandpa.
or
Have you eaten, my child?
Have you eaten my child?
and
I like eating, my wife and my son.
I like eating my wife and my son.
and finally
I know that you'll kill, John.
I know that you'll kill John.
These are just four of the many examples of what can happen if you don't put a comma in the right place. Remember, use a comma!
Let's eat grandpa.
Have you eaten, my child?
Have you eaten my child?
and
I like eating, my wife and my son.
I like eating my wife and my son.
and finally
I know that you'll kill, John.
I know that you'll kill John.
These are just four of the many examples of what can happen if you don't put a comma in the right place. Remember, use a comma!
Comma Fun :)
Without punctuation - Let's eat Grandpa.
With punctuation - Let's eat, Grandpa.
Without punctuation - Let's go hunt dad.
With punctuation - Let's go hunt, dad.
Without punctuation - Go, slow men at work
With punctuation - Go slow, men at work
Comma Fun!!!
Today we talked about how important commas are.
Here are a few examples where commas are needed BADLY!
Toilet ONLY for disabled elderly pregnant children.
Toilet ONLY for the disabled, elderly, pregnant and children.
I want to harvest and plow Gina!
I want to harvest and plow, Gina!
"But you need to eat my friend"
"But you need to eat, my friend"
Here are a few examples where commas are needed BADLY!
Toilet ONLY for disabled elderly pregnant children.
Toilet ONLY for the disabled, elderly, pregnant and children.
I want to harvest and plow Gina!
I want to harvest and plow, Gina!
"But you need to eat my friend"
"But you need to eat, my friend"
sentances that have different meanings without commas
Lets eat, kids
Lets eat kids
Chickens, keep dogs on lead
Chickens keep dogs on lead
Lets, eat grandpa
Lets eat grandpa
Caution pedestrians, slippery when wet
Caution pedestrians slippery when wet
Lets, eat grandma
Lets eat grandma
Slow, children at play
Slow children at play
MY TRIP=Shriya
! My awesome trip to Cape Reinga !
On the school holidays my family and me went up north to Cape Reinga for two days, we had left at 5:00am on Monday for our trip my uncle and his family wanted to join us so did.
We had left and on our way to Silverdale because my uncle still hadn’t came so we texted him and we stopped at the gas station and while we were waiting we got some pies and hot chocolate and then after a while he came and we were again off to Cape Reinga .
On our way we did stop at some town and we also went to the Cape Reinga lighthouse and the Glowworm cave but I konoe that it is a long long way from Silverdale.
And after a long day my mum had booked three rooms so we stayed the night and in the morning we headed back for Manukau.
AND THAT’S MY HOLIDAYS
My Amazing Holiday
In my holiday I didn't really do much but play Xbox but the second week was more exiting the first because I went over to Luke's house.
This is how it all started we were both on Xbox talking to each other on line then Luke came up with the bright idea of me coming over to his house so I did we met halfway. When we met halfway I saw someone else in the distance it was Nathan who is one of Luke's best friends. On our way back to Luke's house we stopped of at Nathan's nan's house and got some soda stream but I wasn't thirsty so I was just chatting. We finally made back at Luke's house and we played Xbox for maybe ten minutes then we decided to go to the park. So we went on Instagram and asked people if they wanted to go to the park there was some people that said they were coming but didn't so we just hanged out at the park and did some parkour.
So that pretty much concludes that one day of my holiday it was really fun for me because I got to hang out with some friends and because we did some parkour so would like to hang with me for the holidays?
This is how it all started we were both on Xbox talking to each other on line then Luke came up with the bright idea of me coming over to his house so I did we met halfway. When we met halfway I saw someone else in the distance it was Nathan who is one of Luke's best friends. On our way back to Luke's house we stopped of at Nathan's nan's house and got some soda stream but I wasn't thirsty so I was just chatting. We finally made back at Luke's house and we played Xbox for maybe ten minutes then we decided to go to the park. So we went on Instagram and asked people if they wanted to go to the park there was some people that said they were coming but didn't so we just hanged out at the park and did some parkour.
So that pretty much concludes that one day of my holiday it was really fun for me because I got to hang out with some friends and because we did some parkour so would like to hang with me for the holidays?
Saturday, 25 July 2015
My holidays Carl.
My holidays
Then the next week after that I went 10 pin bowling with Jacob, his sister, Emily and I. I won the first game and Jacob won the second one and we had to wait ages for my mum to pick us up and finally she arrived and went home. On the final Thursday I went to jump with Flynn and we were so tired after that. So he came to my place and we practiced netball and played volleyball as well. On the last day I went to see the minions movie with my mum and sister which was pretty funny and cool. On the final four days of the holidays I practiced netball shooting for the next week's tournament the following friday which year 8 boys won.
Thursday, 23 July 2015
My Holiday
My Holiday started a bit earlier than the rest of my school . My Holiday started at 12.00 pm but the start of my holiday didn't start off as a holiday because I had to go to my first tutoring class it was really boring when the tutoring had finished. We speed home and waited are uncle to arrive when he did arrive it was total chaos. He was taking care of us while our parents were out at a fancy party. We were up till midnight playing games and eating pizza and watching tv . The next day we went to watch the minion movie it was great and the next day we went to inside out with my uncle Francis It was also a great movie. I didn't do any more fun activities for the rest of the week . But on Saturday we had to pack for our trip to Palmerston North we also had my cousin and aunt around we were going to leave the very next day we had to rest it was going to be a big day tomorrow.It was the big day and also a cold one we finished our packing and head out of the house and fluid up and headed off. We didn't leave until 10.00 am. The drive down was long about 6 hours and it’s really boring but we had a TV to watch we stopped in Taupo to have lunch and get groceries. We did not stop until waiouru. We stopped to play in the snow. I fell through it it was hilarious when we finally made it to Palmerston North it was 7:00 pm we hardly had time to unpacked when we were given dinner and sent to bed .The rest of the week wasn't all that fun but it did get fun when we went ice skating with one of my mum’s friend and her children. It was so hard I fell on my butt a lot But it didn't take me long to find out how to do it when we had finished skating we went to McDonald's for dinner after dinner we went back my grandpa's place and watched a show named road madness It was hilarious . The next days wasn't all that interesting but on Thursday we travelled down to Taupo to spend a night with my dad it was awesome he had curry and rice of dinner . The next day was Friday and it was one of the longest days of my holiday because in the morning we travelled to Rotorua to have lunch and go on the luge and gondola the luge was fun but I did hold up some people on my last go on . Then we travelled back down to Auckland it took about 5 hours it was a really boring trip but it was good to speak with my dad. When we got back it was 7:30 pm we had time to watch robin hood the prince of thieves the next two days we rested for the long week ahead of us.
My school holiday
Second week of the holidays was awesome too. My mum, dad, uncle, and me went to watch Terminator genisys in the early week while we watched Ant-man during that second week. Saturday was a chill day where me and my mum spent time at home doing our own things. My mum catched up on some of her movie in the Main lounge while I was in the next lounge watching Naruto shippuden and reading fan-fiction. Also on most days I helped out at the bakery with cupcake designs and other things like doing the gingerbread-men, grating carrots, closing the lids of the fruit-salad bowls, making fruit-custard tarts and other things.
Overall It was a great holiday and one that I thoroughly enjoyed. If you want to watch a funny anime video please click here https://youtu.be/U8Qnp9e3xEg
Wednesday, 22 July 2015
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Tuesday, 21 July 2015
Xbox Addict - Victoria's Holiday

First person military war thriller, exploring the exotic Himalayan country-like fictional world, creating unimaginable realistic celebrity faces and guessed hundreds of words people were attempting to draw, was what I got up to in the holidays.
Whether I was riding on top of an elephant or fighting off green-blob like objects, I was sitting around staring at any screen I could possibly find. My holidays was a mix and mash off listening to old 'throwback' songs and talking to my so called 'online' friends. When my sister could be bothered, we would eventually go out everyday for a run.. something I thought I wasn't capable of considering the couch looked irresistible.
Yes, the Victoria Stephenson did actually go out for runs, walks with Mummy and weeding the garden. I was actually doing cardio too! At 5:30 pm on most nights, if you were heading into Wattle downs, you would see us walking. If you were awake at 6:00 am, you would see the Stephenson Sisters running to the duck pond and so on.
So that's basically a sum up of what I actually did besides me staying awake till morning and sleeping most of the day, to me raging at games and dying unexpectedly.
This nocturnal human being had one of the most boring holidays in all holidays accounted for.
Monday, 20 July 2015
Magic
Watch this amazing magic video and have your mind blown from all the cool tricks:
https://youtu.be/Ob7nx4BAJb0
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Holiday!!!
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